this song is unfortunately caught in a spot where its sound design is solid but the mixing is so thin it becomes a problem.

i would personally work on choosing more fitting sounds (specifically the drums are really not as punchy as they should be), mixing effects and noise lower (they really crowd up the entire mix and make it seem flatter) and not distorting the sound in the mastering process. also, potentially try sidechaining to the kick - or sidechaining further if you are already sidechaining - as is usually done in edm, as it feels like it doesn't sufficiently cut through the mix.

other than that it's a cool rework! i like how the supersaws sound a lot even if they could use some layering to expand their low mids.